@xxxSexiigurlxxx No that's clearly not okay. You can't take the same plot my story has or you're still copying, no matter what the sames of the characters are or the name of the title. I'd really think about what you're doing right now. Be smart about this! I'm a nice person but not when someone doesn't deserve my understanding and kindness.
Ok, I sympathize. Because you're being bombarded by everyone. We all make mistakes, and we all learn from them. Okay, great. So, I'm hoping you learned your lesson. Not to be rude or anything. Well, if what I say hurts you, I apologize.
"Please check out my new story :)" That's funny, because the only story I see is the one written by the amazing Molly. It's not fair for you to copy her work and say that it's yours; and seriously, did you think no one would know? It's one thing to steal a story that someone else worked so hard on; it's another to "write" it word for word. No literary agent will want you if you can't even write your own works. And if your dream is to get a whole bunch of angry messages concerning a story that you stole from someone else, well then, your dream's come true. If not, then I suggest you please take down Molly's story and replace it with something that's your own. Thanks.
Your dreams most certainly are NOT going to come true if you steal other people's work! Shame on you!
And that literary agent? No one will want you if you can't even write sweetheart.
As I, and every other person who has commented below me have said, shame on you!!!
Get an original idea and make your own story instead of copying someone else's work. There's no way a literary agent will want you if you've committed copyright infringement.