xxx_sza

Hey guys everyone who has read Twilight Baby Bella, if you want to read the editing of chapter 1 and the extra I've added, then feel free. You don't have to but i would like it if you did so you can gimme some feedback and if you want a shout out say in the comments!!!  Luv yas bye!!!

ThatGirl_Jazz

Hi I'm not trying to be mean but your book "Twilight Baby Bella" is confusing. You skipped from her being a baby to being a grown up. I was actually looking forward to seeing her life as a baby. To see(well read and imagine) their faces when they realize how intelligent she really was. But it's ok, you're doing great, you don't have to stress over my expectations. Keep doing what you're doing. Your work on your books are really good. Don't let nobody tell you otherwise. Again I'm sorry if I sounded a bit rude and mean. May God always give you his glory. Good day.

xxx_sza

Hey guys everyone who has read Twilight Baby Bella, if you want to read the editing of chapter 1 and the extra I've added, then feel free. You don't have to but i would like it if you did so you can gimme some feedback and if you want a shout out say in the comments!!!  Luv yas bye!!!

xxx_sza

Hey guys i just updated twilight baby bella and i wrote like a whole page but its only put up not even half of the first paragraph, I'll try and fix that asap, try to ignore, wattpad has just been an ass lately, ok bye !!! Nite !!