diplious

Hey! I just read desperado and from what I've seen so far it's a great start! You've laid out the foundation quite well, and the story line is strong. The atmosphere you've set is really well. The semi-cliffhanger at the end of chapter 2 really makes the reader want to continue, especially from my perspective I was expecting you dive into a redemption arc but to see him aggressive and immoral was brilliant and unexpected and pulls me in to see where this story will be going further!

xxxmilan

Thank you so much, I decided to take the story into a different direction and rewrite it. I'll be really glad if you'll read the new version❤️
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