Hello xyanx, I read your novel and it is very clear that you do not know anything about the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia, its traditions and its societies. In Saudi Arabia, there is no mixing between the sexes except in cases of necessity or in public places. As a Saudi, I tell you that Saudi Arabia and its people are based on the principles of Islamic law and do not exceed them Under any circumstances.
In addition to the fact that alcohol is forbidden in the religion of Islam, when I read your story and saw its description,I felt truly insulted...The story and its principles and morals are absolutely not appropriate for Saudi Arabia and Muslims above all.
I hope that you will amend the story to suit the truth and that you will obtain information from reliable sources (you do not want to distort Reputation of Muslims and Arab Countries) Or you can write to me and I can provide you with the information you need in your novel, whatever it is.
If neither option seems appropriate to you, please archive the novel or change its content to a country other than Saudi Arabia.
Thanks for reading my message.
