AthynaJasmine
I'm really sorry about that I made a mistake but I changed the content I hope you can forgive me I'm really sorry I won't do it again I swear
AthynaJasmine
Nice I like it
AthynaJasmine
No offence taken well I didn't notice but thank you I owe you
AthynaJasmine
I love your chapter don't worry it still me I just changed my username and profile I hope you can make more chapters and maybe you can read my work of Fujiyuri
xyzvibey
You’re work is great, but there were a few things. Please don’t take this as rude. You can improve your punctuation, grammar, quotation, and spelling. As in quotation marks for when a character talks/thinks. Ex. “Tomorrow is a big day!” ____ said/thought. You also don’t want to have a run-on sentence for the whole chapter. Punctuation allows readers to pause. Make sure to read over your work too! Overall, you’re work was great. You’re plot and description was great.
JasmineHughes092
I love this so much i enjoyed it so much I'm literally screaming AHH
JasmineHughes092
I loved everything you write I hope you can make more
JasmineHughes092
Thanks a million times I loved it so so much your the best
JasmineHughes092
Thank you thank you I love it i hope you can make more because I love it so so much
JasmineHughes092
I would love to help you if your having any trouble with the story maybe a a scene were Yuri gets jealous and I really love the chapters I like it no I loved it your work is amazing
JasmineHughes092
Thank you thank you a million times thank you I love this