Celestiva_
Hello, I found you again after reading Belle Ame, and found my previous request to rewrite your CN x reader.
I apologize for my late night ineloquence.
To be clear, I would still like to rewrite your book, and you won't hear any complaints if you deny.
If you would like to continue the book yourself, I have some criticisms as a reader.
Celestiva_
Even though it's technically just dropped/on years long hiatus, the story is basically over. Yn is caught, she already tricked Chuuya once, he won't fall for it again. She has lost everything, he has her in his palm. She is likely going through emotional/mental hell. He will always be stronger than her. He has a lot of subordinates and connections, she has nobody.
This isn't even dark romance, this is a terrifying situation. Obviously he's wrong, and even though she'll probably girlboss her way out of immediate danger, this story only felt all of this on a surface level.
The story ends when she's able to give legit evidence to her innocence (then realistically caught and killed/confined, but maybe she'll get out of it) or runs away with a new name and ID.
Celestiva_
The way Chuuya's manipulation was carried out was way too convenient and ooc. I already ranted about it somewhat in the comments of the book that ties into my current review.
As is, your story isn't really Chuuya x insert, because their relationship has no chance anymore. He got her alone and betrayed her trust without her knowing.
They don't have any chemistry, but that doesn't matter at all. Their relationship was over before it started because he touched her without her being able to consent. She was drugged and asleep.
Celestiva_
The beginning was a great hook, with the two plots well connected, and a deliberate scheme to trap the insert character in a desperate situation. The relationships between the co-workers, friends, etc were well depicted in the beginning. Unfortunately, that's about as much good as I have to say about this work.
