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Hi! I hope you are doing well and I'm so sorry to bother! If you have the time please check it out my book, a vote, comment or a follow would mean a lot! Thank you!!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403565955?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Diamxndwayz

nakatambak sa library ko asdjckkk. It feel like coming back again to my shs life haha. I really love Gisselle and Rielle I hope my special chapter thoorrrr plss.. no pressure po but waiting me. 

plss pkss im begging u author make the scene yung college days si gisselle. yung sanang ginagawa niya yung movie. pls im flustered now (⁠〒⁠﹏⁠〒⁠)

Hello author! I saw your post sa blue app na naghahanap ka ng criticism or feedback about your work. Before anything else, nabasa ko na talaga yung dating version ng story na ito, and masasabi ko na madami talagang nagbago sa flow ng story compared before 
          
          opinion ko lang naman ito ha. ung first chapters okay naman siya and maganda naman talaga. cguro yung transition lang sa ibang parts medyo tumatagilid or medyo bigla minsan,.
          
          tapos doon sa plot naman, okay din siya since school talaga yung main focus ng story mo pro siguro mas magiging interesting pa if may konting adventure or ibang settings scenes para hindi lang umiikot sa iisang environment and para mas may ibang experience din yu
          kami readers habang tumatakbo yung story mo po,..
          
          so characters naman, medyo curious lang ako sa ibang details  yung about sa mamamama ni gisselle, hindi ko masyadong nakuh kung ano ung nangyari sa part na yun  nagkaayos ba sila? anO naging ending ng situation nila? tapos sa background din ni gisselle, feeling ko medyo kulang pa ng kaunti kasi parang may parts na gusto ko pa siyang mas maintindihan bilang character. If ever na irrevise mo siya in the future, feeling ko malaking help if mas maeexpand pa yung part na yon.
          
          Yung grammar and narration mo naman, okay naman talaga and actually maganda siya ndescribe mo ng maayos yung scenes kaya madali siyang iimagine habang nagbabasa. may ilang parts lang na medyo nakakalito for me (or baka ako lang din talaga yung hindi agad nakaintindi ), pero hindi naman siya super
          g problem.
          
          overallpo okay naman talaga yung story. siguro yung plot lang yung pinaka-napansin ko medyo nagexpect lang siguro ako ng mas mataas pa in some parts, pero considering na sinabi mong first story mo ito, magAnda na siyaaaa .
          
          I hope makatulong yung suggestions ko po. This is just my opinion and preference as someone na matagal nang nagbabasa, so please take it lightly lang din hihi. 
          
          

I unpublished chapter 16 huhu  I had to do some major revisions kasi. gusto ko talagang maayos siya and maging worth it basahin, so please bear with me muna 
          

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