mnmmuas

I just got done reading the unwanted promise and it made my heart jump, ache, sad (I even cried) I would love to read more stories or love stories from you! while reading I picture everything in mind. I love reading when I can vision it and read it at the same time. Some parts I even vision it as myself (Luna)

mshummingbird

I am on chapter 10 of "The Unwanted Promise" and I would like to say that I am impress and I love the way you wrote this story so far. I was up super late reading it and I am going to continue until I am done. I cannot wait to see what happens next. <3 Please keep writing. You're super good at it.

mnxiongg

Hello Hello, I just finished reading "The Unwanted Promise" within the 3 hours as I came upon it during my browsing.  I would like to applaud how you express each of the characters emotions in this novel as it brought the highlight of it out. So far this is the best I have read so far and I enjoyed it cause you were able to exhibit our 'Hmong' traditions. I cried and laughed through the whole thing but most of all the plot twisting at the end which left me heart broken. To be honest I didn't see that coming, however it would be great if you were able to turn this story into a movie. Overall I can not wait to see your next work for us readers.

violethao2021

Hi, so I read your story "The Unwanted Promise " Although I was on chapter 14 I couldn't wait to read the ending. I want wonder why did you make it a sad ending ? I really like how you made there love for each other inmocent. While reading it I also loved how you expressed the characters feeling, especially for the wedding, I felt like the way you expressed Luna's feeling were do strong. I'm still reading now on chapter 22.