Please tell me your thoughts about my story! I'm sure all of you here are GRAMMAR NAZI so I'm deeply sorry if my English is so poor , I'm not really good this is not my native language ...*bow*
if you have some free time to read it please visit .
please tell me on what I need to improve
And I well do my best to improved it .*bow *
And for the Readers who give there time to view, vote, and leave some comments.
And also for the follower and the following.
*bow * THANK YOU VERY MUCH *bow *