__Nanamin__
Hey, I really like the whole concept of the story, but there are quite a few mistakes. If you dont mind, could I help out a bit, as a viewer with writing experience?
__Nanamin__
I understand your worries, but do you use messenger or what's up? It's safer than giving phone numbers. Or even email is fine. I just really like your work and wanna help out.
yare_chan_o075
@__Nanamin__ well I don't use Instagram or any social media due to some personal issues and exchanging numbers seems kind of risky as well . So yeah I'm sorry but thank you for thinking of helping me . I'm really appreciating your efforts!