talk_to_my_plots

Hey i am sorry for posting it here but I am new writer and wanted to gain some views... Hope you don't mind.
          
          "They say friendships are supposed to be simple.
          But what if every laugh, every glance, every shared cup of coffee with her starts to feel like something more?
          I tried so hard not to let my heart get tangled between love and friendship.
          But you know what they say—
          the heart always knows what it wants.
          And mine knew exactly what it wanted—
          my best friend, more than just bestfriend."
          Please give it a try
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/401632603?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=talk_to_my_plots

DayStartWithY0u

hello dear 
          sorry for bothering you but could you please check this story and give writer some suggestions or feedback? 
          
          Story Name: Mortal Promises ~ Avneil FF
          Writer : WaveTeal
          
          Whenever you read the story please try to leave your review about it in the comment section it will be really helpful for writer.