@SalwaImtiaz19 Salam alaykum Salwa.I think you need to work on your grammatical errors,spellings and also your punctuations.You have a beautiful story,but the errors could annoy or irritate readers.I also feel you should go through your work thoroughly before putting it on wattpad.You could seek assistance from your siblings or a close friend.Readers aren't voting probably because of the errors.