Dannyboy3004
Is you are a man of class
justateacupmate
Eyyyyyyyy
MorganaWray
Underfan pls read my horror book called Never say Alice
yeetyoneet
@ChuckyIceheart It's a great start! Some twists here and there,John seeing Alice,Molly dying,Perhaps a friend for John who teases him about 'Alice' and whatever.The beginning was great tho! I honestly have no idea why you ask me but eh.I think your story has a great start!