shirley0121

yefeiah

ill check it out when i have time 
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3 

yefeiah

@ScarlettBlackDaisy Hii luv, okay so I just finished your book in one day. It was amazing, I love how the characters were written so well and how they were actually relatable. A word for feedback, I think you accidentally doubled your chapter thirty-six because there are two, like where chapter thirty-nine should be. If I'm being honest I hate books that have bad grammar as it puts me off reading, but your's had amazing grammar. I also noted how it is based on a true story, so I wish those people a very happy life and I thank them for letting their story be told. I don't even know if you'll read this but thanks for the story and you should def try to get it published because I'll be one of the firsts to get a copy :) ps. you also robbed of us smut, but maybe ur just uncomfortable writing that, I'll let you go this time because the story was amazing with or without it anyway. sorry for the long ass paragraph, lots of love here and thank you !!
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

ScarlettBlackDaisy

@yefeiah 
            
            I get notifications for votes or comments or reading list adds (: thank you ❤️
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yefeiah

@ScarlettBlackDaisy damn you can see you reads your book thats kinda cool !! but ill be sure to give you feedback when im done
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Zuko_Azulon

Ayyy. An atla fan! Omg, I luv u. And Zuko in ur pfp, that was one of my fav moments. I seek atla fans, glad I found u luv.
          
          Nice meeting u :) 

Zuko_Azulon

@yefeiah Ur my kind of ppl too. And yh, wattpad is great :D
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yefeiah

@Zuko_Azulon omg im so glad you found me i love it here, u r my kind of people. :)
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