Fusion_Estelar
(Hello what to Fate Of Power?)
Hola? Que sucedió con Fate Of Power?
yeliah0412
yeliah0412
Fate of Power is done being edited (finally)! Even if you've already read it I highly recommend rereading because I made some pretty big changes. I decided to publish one chapter a day, so chapter one is available to read as of today.
Like always, I would love any and all feedback on the story and my writing! Tell me what you like/don't like, if something doesn't make sense, if there are any inconsistencies-- stuff like that. Thank you for being patient and supporting my works thus far, enjoy!
mas167
I'm writing another book and I would really like it if you could check it out, its called The Earth's Cycle, its a short novel and the first book in the series, consider it as kind of an appetizer
yeliah0412
Sorry it's taking so long to finish editing Fate of Power! I couldn't write for the past two weeks because of midterms, but I have been working hard on it all weekend. I have a few more to go through yet, but I should be able to post the changes soon! Thanks for being patient with me!
yeliah0412
@CainisLupis Honestly I don't see any holes in the plot so far. One thing I was a little confused on was why Sean would use his sword against the Demora when he had told his student not to use close range weapons on it. However, as I think more about it, I feel like he was acting with emotions (heat of the moment), rather than his training because he clearly cared for Sidney a lot as well. If this is the case maybe you could add something that makes it more obvious? The different character's you've introduced have added a lot to your world building, and you did it VERY well. You've introduced three different main characters (viewpoints), if I'm remembering right, but not much has been done with one of them (forgot their name atm, sorry). I think the best way to describe this is by saying that the third character seems more detached from the main story and I'm not sure where they're going to fit in at this point. This isn't really a major concern, though, because it's still very early on in the story if you get what I mean. Your writing style amazes me, though, and it makes the story so much better. I'm jealous! ;)
yeliah0412
@CainisLupis I really enjoyed reading it and I love your writing style! Thanks for supporting my writing too!
yeliah0412
So I changed my mind and I just posted the prologue! I estimate it's going to be a few more weeks before I'm finished rewriting the chapters given the amount of homework, projects, and exams I have to worry about right now. I thought I would give you guys something to read in the meantime (currently working on chapter 3). I hope you like it!
yeliah0412
I hope everyone is having an amazing day! I've decided to write a prologue for Fate of Power, which is finished, but I am still editing the other chapters. I plan to publish all of the revisions and the prologue on the same day to make things easier for myself since I'm going to be moving a lot of things around. I still have a decent amount of editing to get though, but I am excited about the changes I've made so far.
I appreciate it when you comment and hit vote to let me know what you think of what I've written (suggestions are always appreciated). I will support your work in return!
yeliah0412
Chapter 11 is now published! I’m looking for ideas of what should happen next (before the next main bit of plot which is revealed in that chapter). Let me know if you have an idea! Since I don’t know what to write I can’t tell you when the next chapter will be released, but you can expect some revisions to the earlier chapters.
yeliah0412
Chapter 10 of Fate of Power has been published! Let me know what you think by commenting and voting!
Chapter 11 is finished as well, but I'm going to post that one in a few days. After that, I will begin publishing the changes I made to the earlier chapters. I will announce when that is finished, so if you want to go back and reread (which I recommend so you aren't confused in later chapters) you can.
I hope everyone has a great day!
yeliah0412
Okay... so I have some good news. I have two new chapters of Fate of Power that are nearly ready to be published. I just need to add a little bit more to one of them and then edit. I expect them to be published by next weekend if not earlier. I have made progress on rewriting the first 9 chapters, but there's a lot there so it's taking me a while. It's likely that some parts will be shifted to another chapter, but I'm not sure yet.
And finally, on a different note, I just published a few poems I've written. They're a little depressing, sorry, but if I were to write poetry about something I don't relate to it wouldn't be any good. I hope you like them.
Like always, please comment and vote! I want to make my writing better, and that only happens with your feedback. Thank you to those of you who have supported me so far.
SuperAnimeNeko
There’s something I’ll never understand. I can write decent songs which are just poems. But I can’t write decent poems. That’s confusing...