yellow-bloom

I’ve been wondering about how Jin-Woo walks for some time. I’ve read some fics in which he always acts assured, walking into rooms and situations like he owns them. And it makes sense: he’s always kept that image of assurance for Jin-Ah and for himself. Showing weakness would have been admitting defeat to the cruelty of his world and the gates that took his family away.
          	But I don’t think that’s how he walks. Because it’s just pretense. He spent 4 years stepping into dungeons as an E-rank. He knows danger could be just around the corner. So even if he likes to put up a font, his steps are neither smooth nor calm. He walks discreetly, cautiously, ready to jump away at any moment. It’s not the predatory walk of a panther ready to strike. It’s the walk of someone who has been a prey for too long for his body to just forget what it feels like.
          	What are your thoughts on this?

yellow-bloom

I’ve been wondering about how Jin-Woo walks for some time. I’ve read some fics in which he always acts assured, walking into rooms and situations like he owns them. And it makes sense: he’s always kept that image of assurance for Jin-Ah and for himself. Showing weakness would have been admitting defeat to the cruelty of his world and the gates that took his family away.
          But I don’t think that’s how he walks. Because it’s just pretense. He spent 4 years stepping into dungeons as an E-rank. He knows danger could be just around the corner. So even if he likes to put up a font, his steps are neither smooth nor calm. He walks discreetly, cautiously, ready to jump away at any moment. It’s not the predatory walk of a panther ready to strike. It’s the walk of someone who has been a prey for too long for his body to just forget what it feels like.
          What are your thoughts on this?

heldbyshadow

omg thank you for putting my story on your reading list ! You're like one of my favorite authors omg  >///<

heldbyshadow

@yellow-bloom oki I did it ^^
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yellow-bloom

@heldbyshadow sure! I'd love to talk to a fellow author. You can find me on discord at yellow_bloom. Send me a friend request! ;)
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heldbyshadow

@yellow-bloom >///< do you think I can talk to you more like in private like on social if you don’t mind tho … (^^ゞ
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yellow-bloom

Hey guys!
          As you might have noticed, the chapter I promised isn't out yet. I'm sorry about that. I'm readjusting to class, and my workload is tremendous (like, really enormous), so I miscalculated the time it would take me to write the next chapter. I'm currently working on the last part, which means it should be done by the end of the week (let's pray for it). Keyword: should. If the stars align.
          To make up for it, it's going to be a long chapter! And no, you're not allowed to remind me that it would already be published if it weren't that long. (I'm joking, but it's really twice the size of some other chapters)
          Please bear with me a little bit, and as always, thank you for reading, your patience and your support!

yellow-bloom

Now that summer is here, I've decided to edit TAKP (or rather straight up rewrite the first chapters because my early writing style makes me cringe *sad laughter*)
          However, that doesn't mean less chapters for you! Since I have more time now, I'll keep on updating every two weeks, maybe earlier if I can.
          Thank you for sticking with me and my story all this time, I'll come back to you soon with the next chapter!