i mean as expected, your writing is amazing n it was suspenseful :") i guess the only thing is maybe you could add a bit more detail (how did taehyung feel? what did the house look like? etc. etc.) but honestly that's just my own personal preference but yeaH im excited !!
@hyelights awh i'm so glad you're into it!! i'll definitely be adding more detail i just wanted to provide a feel for the story that's to come. thank you so much for the feedback sometimes i feel like people are too afraid to critique me so i appreciate this more than you know : )
ok but twice is also a really great group as well as bts so can we all just calm down, appreciate how hard the idols work to produce such wonderful music, and enjoy what they've created.