yeti14

This article may help you out with writing better fight scenes.
          http://www.standoutbooks.com/heres-how-to-write-a-damn-good-fight-scene/

@MrWordsmith I'm having trouble deciding!! That's why I'm asking you!

Okay, can people please tell me which stories they like? I'll keep writing those and delete the others. 

thanx for the vote :)