yiAnyiAn20

hello everyone please try reading this and let me hear what you think   
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/1960292

yiAnyiAn20

@myluvrenren np.. it was fine, l wasnt really annoyed, its just that feeling of something is wrong with the grammar or the miss used  of words  that you get when you read i just want to correctcant really explain it right, english aint really my first language. ✌ but other than that, just re-read your story of you feel something is not right search on the net how to correct it(or just ask me for question) and the miss used of words, no need to used difficult words just used words that are easy to understand—if you do want to use such word(diff) just search the synonyms of the word you want.
          
          ex.
          beg (humbly ask someone) IMPORTUNE
          //if he were alive now, i should importune him with my questions//

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example:
          
          -realise(british variant) 
          //i realise now that all of my efforts are in vain//
          -realize(american variant)
          //do yu realize what you have done!?//
          —see they have the same use and meaning(to become aware/bring something to being) but different spelling
          
          -Apologise(british variant)
          //to apologise is to admit weakness...//
          -Apologize(american variant)
          //he apologize to all hes wrong doing...//
          —same as realize
          
          -family(S) denots a group of person tht belongs to the same household
          //my family are going to have a vacation this summer//
          -families(P) denots a group of person of two or more house hold(your family, my family, his/her family) 
          //Marques and Crambell are noble families//
          
          -Other refers to something different
          //i cant find my other shoe!//
          -Others refers to things that are different when you dont mention a noun  
          //the others didny want to go the movie, even though i did.// (the other people)