@Multijoys thank you thank you thank you! I will correct those. Thank you so much for taking the time out to let me know about those errors. I wish I didn't suck at writing so bad :P
You are awesome!
Hello, I just wanted to let my readers know that I added a significant scene to chapter 3 of the book that will give a lot more background on Phil's life. Let me know what you think of it.
Thanks.
-Y