louis_debora

This is gripping and beautifully paced. The way the story shifts from a calm, rainy walk to pure dread is smooth and cinematic. The misdirection with the footsteps is clever, and the sudden collapse into nightmare and captivity hits hard. The ending line ties everything together with chilling emotional weight. A very atmospheric and well-crafted piece.

ykitttttt

@louis_deboraThanks, but I prefer to keep all conversations on Wattpad :)
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louis_debora

@ykitttttt I ask because I work in digital art professionally, so your cast really caught my attention.
            Got a couple of visual ideas that might fit your world — but I don’t want to clutter your comments.
            If you’d like to exchange concepts with me so we could continue the rest conversation on our socials, mail or etc?
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ykitttttt

@louis_debora  I sadly don't I never thought about it but she's 16 at the start and end  18  at the end :)
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