HedwigPrewett

Thanks so much for voting on my story. I hope you like it and it meets your expectations. Please tell me what you think. I accept all feedback and criticism ♥

ymaldonado123

@HedwigPrewett it was a real tear jerker. The ending had me like. You're a great writer. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. 
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HedwigPrewett

@ymaldonado123 Thanks so much for the advice. I really appreciate it . I know this story is short but I've got more to come so don't worry <3
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ymaldonado123

@HedwigPrewett it's a great story. My only criticism is that I wish the story was longer. But even for the story being a short story the story line is very good.
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