I really liked ur story, even if u thought it was bad...only the writer sees every single mistake, even if some readers point out the flaws, u should still continue for ur reasons, not their's...criticism from others should be a motivation, the way I see it...I'm not asking u to continue the story, its just seemed that u have this great story that no one really noticed until it was discontinued on here..idk what else to say so, good luck if u decide to write a new story, u're a great writer, now u know that u have at least 1 fan out there.....
