hhhh i have a new story coming soon,,, it’s so fun to write so i hope you guys enjoy it! ☁️ if you have time, tell me if it sounds interesting or not,, please and thank you :(((
my friend is really getting mad at me because i’m helping her through a bad time + the fact she doesn’t wanna be my friend,, new soulmate positions are [open] ùwú
hi
tysm for following, if you have a minute please check out my alpha/omega taekook story BEYOND THE PINES, I’d appreciate any support. ❤️
have an amazing day!
@plzcumtinue i don't know if i would be in a position to judge this since i am not a kpop fan and i know almost nothing about bts but yeah
the good stuff: a pretty good plot so far. does not seem clichèd and includes a lot of useful information/character backstories which would help in the plot development
the not-so-good stuff: 1. quite a number of grammatical errors. grammar errors could affect the story a lot by confusing readers. 2. too many timeline jumps. this is also confusing for readers since readers would end up wondering which timeline are they following. try to make the story in a chronological order, allowing only a flashback/flashforward every 2 or 3 chapters.
hope this helps :)