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But the idea is neat, just take time to correct spelling, grammar, comas and periods. Add space between paragraphs and separate dialogue so readers and tell when its dialogue or when its characters thoughts

I just read it, I like the idea of it, but if you could reread it, fix the grammar and spelling. Also clean it up a bit, make sure to include spaces because when all the words are clumped up readers don’t want to read through the whole thing BC it looks like a huge run on sentence

Okay sounds good