hi! i love that you tried your hardest on your adopted by jenna and tyler story, but i have to give you some criticism on it. it definitely isn't the best thing ive ever read, and here's some tips. you could definitely work on spelling and grammar mistakes, and making it more realistic. because y/n in the story seems to have anxiety i suppose, and if that were truly the case here, wouldn't tyler and josh work on getting her medication for it? and try to make scenes more detailed than they were. my problems are just your story just doesn't seem very realistic, and that's all. you can hate on me if you want, it's not really my issue, but just my opinion.