Rayna Orozco

UPDATE!!!! Update, update, update!!!!!!!
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@Bonhomie no annoyance what so ever! it helps when its more then one. It reminds me. I have bad memory lol. plus it shows me its something that's really important and needs to be improved!(:

Okay, thats good to hear. it will really help your stories. As soon as i wrote that comment, i noticed someone say it on one of your books right before i did lol. i hope i didnt annoy you then. youre welcome and thank you too!

Hi everyone! Just letting you know I am working on Separating my chapters right now! Please keep following and reading! keep going with the feed back too! Thank you again!

@Bonhomie Thank you! I'm taking a break from writing right now to make sure the rest of my chapters will be much better and separated! and of course! I will take a look and give you as much feed back as I can<3 thank you again!

you have some really good stories here. the only advice id like to give you is to separate your paragraphs so its not just one huge paragraph for a page, its a little hard to read like that. maybe check out my story and see what i should improve on. thanks :D