youngtivvy

First page is good. Lo e the cover ;) id know those hips anywher. Smexi babe. Real smexi. Was abit.. not rushed just not enough detail.. where does she work. what does she do. Woman. Arent that bold so add maybe shes alittle nervouse. Does a quick glance around. Explain how she feels. Spend more time getting into just one action stead of hopping to the next. >.< but overall.. hott. Il deffs keep reading. ;)