I generally don't comment on people's books but I just had to. I just wasted hours of my day to read Brazilian lounge and I regret it. I read lots of novels everyday and I've read some bad ones but this is in a world of its own. Marcos can't speak English, and your other characters are just confused. The ending doesn't make sense... It was just left open with no proper conclusion. This is not a hate post, it's constructive criticism. Please work harder on your subsequent books. I hope to read better works of yours.