youramazingcat
Ay! Chapter 2 release for The Fall of Stormterror! I got half the amount of work done in twice the amount of time I was hoping for, but I'm happy iIactually did something! :D
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Mk so, I have finally released the finished version of chapter one! I just needed to add some more onto the end of it pretty much. This week im going to try to get two more chapters out as well
youramazingcat
IM BAAAACK! I'm back from my long vacation and am excited to start working on my stories again. Comment which one you would like seen updated first
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well I go on vacation now and won't be able to be on this platform for awhile, so yeah.
youramazingcat
I just accidentally thought up a fun challenge and i thought I would share it with you guys! Try listening to a song (any will do) and try to detect the story in it, then write a book plot based off of that! If you can't think of a song here is an option that could provide a very interesting story, it is called Redemption by Besomorph & Coopex Ft. Riell
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New story started! I'm Excited for this one. The covers a bit hazy, but I couldn't find anything better at the moment. I hope you guys like it! :3
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Sorry, but I just got SUPER into my novel im writing so my Genshin fan fic is going to be put on hold. I'm not even sure my story is a fan fic anymore. I mean it only has like two characters and two faction names mentioned from the game lol...
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But im grounded for the next 4 days so idk how much ill be able to get done. My goal is by the end of this week.
youramazingcat
OH! im so sorry for the late reply! That sounds amazing! :D
So do they fall out of the sky into the new realm? or do they just appear? Also how do they go into another reality? Because I could write them helping him get back to his own world as a side plot. I'm very excited :D
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@youramazingcat accidentally my character would fall into a whole bunch of reality until he returned to his own, maybe one of your characters could be cameoed in one of those realites, Or I could literally have my character be brought to your reality and we could do something there.
youramazingcat
Hi guys! I just posted chapter 1 of The Fall of Stormterror today! If you have the time deffinitly go check it out and tell me what you think!
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Thank you for the advice! I will be sure to revise my prologue with a bit more flavor :D
something045
-chapter (aka if it’s building up tension, etc)
also, i’d say make a prologue to interest the reader (make it exciting, nobody likes a boring book)
so far it’s amazing though, have a good day!
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b o o- uhh anyway i read your first chapter and i must say it’s pretty good, though it’s very fast-going and the sentences are simple with nothing that pulls the reader in - in ny opinion, it’s basically only dialogue that brings excitement to the chapter. i’d say use puctuation and short/longer sentences( obviously depending on the tension during the book, etc) and use phrases that bring excitement to the book.
quick reminder that i write for fun and don’t know everything there is and these are just things i’ve learnt from my sister! you may want to read other trilogies or sequences for inspiration on phrasing your words accordingly to the