AlinaGarcia995
Hey just wondering r u gonna update soon?
yourfavvdaisy
sinjnombre28
When's the next chapter?? x
SonyaSwan1
Hi
Are you by any chance rewriting capters 12 throygh to 25. As they are no longer showing?
I have read the story before up to where you have added tge new chapter but this is where it stops now
AlinaGarcia995
I believe she is. not that long ago she was saying how she editing stuff but I could be mistaken
yourfavvdaisy
Hey guys Ik I said the chapter would be this week but it was legit gonna be today but the uk has had such gd weather for the first time in ages so I think tomorrow
Nina_asher
Hey sorry for commenting like this here, but I'm a new writer writing my first book, I really hope you could check it out and support me. Your support would be appreciated.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/408007937?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Nina_asher
LInda1587
Chapter 56 not loading
nia19972
hii I got a notif that you published a chapter but I can’t see ittt
yourfavvdaisy
New chapter at least this week
yourfavvdaisy
Heyy I was jst thinking I may cut Theo from this part of the book and bring him into the second one as I’ve gotten loads of hate about him and it may be easier for me to add him in the second book in a different way
SomethingBlue12
@yourfavvdaisy it was nothing, I really like your book and your writing... I think your opinion matters more than ours in what YOU want for YOUR book.. I at least hope I was able to help a little
yourfavvdaisy
@SomethingBlue12 omg that’s actually so kind thank you so much for taking the time to write that
SomethingBlue12
*** to be a little more clear.... I love Theo and those chapters with him were so beautiful that I go back and read them again...
Theo seems, from what I read, as not a virgin.. don't know if I didn't got it right.. and she's 15...and so shy to get in the intimacy part quickly... so leaving his parts will accomplish to let it sit.. and grow.. she will get used to him.. so she can trust him... you don't need to make them a couple yet.. Just co-exist.. with little lingering glances.. built it slowly.. (please don't make him hurt her by being with other girls .. that's the only thing I can ask you... at least not him being interested or involved with others)
If you decide to remove him but keep him in the same position (who he is, his friends, "work") you automatically lose the "I just saw her and she seems like an angel in my arms" effect, which was absolutely perfect you will get it back only if you make him someone who just got there from somewhere else...
It's your book and whatever you do with it should be your choice only and not just because someone didn't like something.. you will never please everyone at once and maybe by changing your work you will lose something beautiful. Your writing is amazing, you put effort and thought in what you do ...we can see that from the time you take from chapter to chapter, you don't rush it and the results are always incredible, so have a little trust in YOUR opinion... try to please yourself and that voice in your head who makes you write your story, stay true to yourself! you've done an amazing work here to start second guessing it.
yourfavvdaisy
Chapter 55 released just now!