ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3 

yours-truley

@ScarlettBlackDaisy OMG your writing is so so so good I literally could not put it down. Truley amazes me how you are able to portray such "touchy" topics that are rarely ever spoken about unless its awfully glamorized. But you do such a great job on characterization and actually making xavier and haley humans with emotions. Your book is amazing and I hope it takes you places cuz ur so talented and awesome and I hope u get rich or get whatever u want ouf of life  thank u 
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raspberriess

thanks for the votes! i'm glad you're enjoying Revenge On The Graysons ❤ have an amazing day 

yours-truley

@raspberriess there's nothing that really needs to be extremely improved with you're book. Maybe just doing you're typical editing on each chapter and for my advice I think that you should add like another conflict to the plot or just some major unexpected plot twist to keep the suspense rising. But as for now I really love you're writing style so make sure to keep doing what you're doing with it. and I'm honestly really surprised your writing doesn't have like a million reads by now, I'm sure it will though soon!
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raspberriess

 ahah thanks! is there any thing you'd like to see be improved in my book? your feedback will be taken into consideration and will definitely help improve my book. 
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potateopenguin

Hi I followed me on your old account and im finally back on wattpad so I followed u :) could u please read my story the princess of crazy town? There's only two chapys so far because I just started writting it but I update on tuesdays. XD

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Elmo looks like me opening the front camera 

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I look wat worse 
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