I just started reading your story, and I really like the idea of Anshika seeing Abhishek beyond the version everyone else sees. There’s something so romantic about a character being understood quietly, through words, before they even know who is truly seeing them.
I’m a new writer here, and my YA romance Something Personal also circles around that feeling — when someone from your past comes back, remembers too much, stands too close, and you’re not sure if it’s real or if you’re turning attention into love. If you ever have a moment, I’d really value your honest opinion: does my Chapter One feel emotionally strong enough to make a reader want to continue?
