Hey guys!
I was wondering if any of you had suggestions for making my story any better, because you read it but don't comment and I was thinking you didn't have any feedback.
Is there anything I could do better?
Also, if you have any other suggestions for horror or demonic stories comment and I'll try and make a short story! The account that has the best idea will get a shout out at the end of the completed story.
Thanks guys!