Andndnndnffb the previous message said pt.3 I meant part 2 :,0
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Now that this oneshot is almost done I’m going back and looking through my writing and I think I’m learning :D I noticed that I usually put a lot of speech in, I don’t really describe there surroundings or like where they are lmao , I didn’t even describe the bar in chapter 2— but I’ll make sure to improve on that with the next one shot!