yuyasakaki

I did not realize that I've had this wattpad account for over a year. Whoa, it doesn't feel that long.

RedNewko_YuyaFangirl

Hey person! Read it all! I mean it! Read it all! If you were killed, I wouldn't be at your funeral. I'd be in jail for killing the person who killed you. We are true friends. We ride together, we die together. Send this to everybody you care about, including me, if you care. I want you to know you are an amazing friend, till death and forever. If I don't get this back, I understand. But I have a game for you. Once you read this letter, you must send this to 15 people, Including me. If you get at least three back, you are loved. Nobody knows how important something is, until they lose it. Tonight (right at 12:00 am), the person you love will realize they love you. If you break this chain, you will have bad luck. With love, send this to the 15. If you dont you will turn ugly one year. A friend told me to do this, so pass it on. Tomorrow, two boys/girls will ask if they can have your number. Send this message to 15 people of bad luck starts for a whole year. This is not fake. Apparently, if you copy and paste this, you will have the best day of your life tomorrow! Good luck!

Damnit-Dear

I totally forgot I was following you and you just randomly appeared XD

Damnit-Dear

Always interested 
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yuyasakaki

@Dannyisjustwow oooh okay! well you do follow a lot of people (just checked haha) and i haven't been writing so i just haven't been popping up so that's something. but i have a couple new ideas i hope to release next month. if you're still interested haha
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yuyasakaki

I feel really bad for not updating! 
          I'll take requests on imagines that I've already done. I linked my tumblr on here so you can take a look at what I have. If you think somethings funny or interesting enough to expand on, tell me which imagine it is and I'll make it into a one shot! 
          Also! I have a one shot in the making for my favorite ship, so hopefully I will have time to get to that.
          Please, request! I love writing crazy imagines so much and I really hope you guys enjoy reading them as much as I enjoy writing them! 

yuyasakaki

I read a few things that you got, just the first chapter, though. My attention span is horrible. As for actual advice, I'm not the best writer myself. I read books and kind of learn from what I read. How to structure, explain, grammar, and plot. I need improvement myself. But from what I've read you should space out your paragraphs more (I actually need to do this myself, it's something new I learned). Your writing seems fine to me and your explanations seem okay so far. By writing, it'll continue to expand so keep going. But make sure you're spacing after periods and commas. Also when you write, for example; "Natsu said, fiddling with his scarf." Commas after said or exclaimed or whatever you use and then continue with what they're doing. (I'm literally the worst at explaining). Comma or punctuation after someone speaks. "Stop burning every building you look at, Natsu!" Gray yelled, punching Natsu's stomach and knocking him unconscious. 
          I've seen Fairy Tail (: haha! 
          
          For the most part, everything else seems fine. As you write you'll get better and better. I'm still learning. I always catch mistakes or plot holes in my writing/story. 
          Speaking of plot, if you plan to write a story, as in not one shots, like an actual book, I suggest planning. It helps so much. 
          
          I hope this was helpful. I love helping people in any way that I can. 
          As for arc v, you should watch it. It's amazing! I love every minute of it! I love the plot, they seem to be building it quite well. It's a good way to see a slow-paced storyline, and hopefully it'll have a big impact when the important stuff hit. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask.