yyyunaxz

Just posted my first chapter to ‘iced americano’ and honestly i don’t like it but its whateverrr. If anyone had read  it i would love to hear your thoughts on it !!!!! Also does anyone have any tips on how to make time skips feel less abrupt?
          	Maybe i just need to write more about each moment .

yyyunaxz

Just posted my first chapter to ‘iced americano’ and honestly i don’t like it but its whateverrr. If anyone had read  it i would love to hear your thoughts on it !!!!! Also does anyone have any tips on how to make time skips feel less abrupt?
          Maybe i just need to write more about each moment .