I read your story about fallout. I think you have something going on but it needs refinement. Try to correct some spelling and grammar and I think people will read for it for longer. I'm not the best example of grammar but I broke from my Kentucky way of speech. I was raised in Boyd county, right in that Tri-state area and I learned some back woods appellation English that's reminiscent of Irish-English. I know it's rough spelling and wording things right when they always tell you "spell it how it sounds" and you only know to pronounce it in an accent. It sucks, I know. Unfortunately most people don't have the accent and definitely don't get it. To have a lot of readers, you gotta break from it and talk like them. Tust me, fraind, I no tuh struggel af tawlkin lik a citty shlicker but four tem ciddy fol to liek yeu yeu gohdda shound liek 'em. Just wanna help you get bigger, friend. ;)
