zaidman1

@nihcelpud @circlesnsquares Thank you very much and I am happy you both like it :D 

nihcelpud

I am done critiquing Adrian Langer. Your writing is very effective and the imagery is great. I think you have a lot of potential. The plot is interesting and as long as you keep it that way, nothing else matters much. The trick is keeping it interesting. Don't give away the plot secrets all at once and throw in some twists as well. Best of luck!

feeWrites

Just finished catching up on Adrian Langer and the War of Aaton. Brilliant! Ignore what I said about voting problems, tho, I figured out that I just need to disconnect from my facebook account. :P And thanks for being so patient with me. I know it must seem like I've neglected your story, but it really is one of my favorites and I hope you'll update soon! =D