Rocking!

Salaam dear!!
          Mind giving my work a try.....?
          http://my.w.tt/UiNb/JycC1PZvVu
          Vote N comment if U like it.

Hey there ☺can you please give a shot to my story Mr. Jerk Calling...? I hope you like it and you can give your views about it too ❤

     Hi! Bookcite here and I just wanted to give you some tips. I noticed you often use lowercase "i" when you should be using "I". Also you are forgetting to indent sometimes.
          
          Wrong place to begin your paragraph.
              
               Right place to begin your paragraph.
          
               Just put a space in there. I use either 5 or 6 but you could use more or less. 
          
               Also, try not to use "u" and "r" and letters in place of words when you want to sound like a good professional writter.
          
               I hope you have a good night/day and keep well!
          

I'm not special,
          I'm just LIMITED EDITION!!

Sometimes you will never know the value of a moment until it becomes a memory . :(

Behind that smile , there is a story you would never understand .

The sad thing is .....
          nobody ever really knows how much anyone else is hurt . We could be standing next to somebody who is completely broken and we wouldn't even know it . 

Without u .....
          i cnt breath .....
          i luv u....
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          my nose ;) :*

makeup dil ko sajata hai ,
          muskurahat hoton (lips) ko sajata hai ,
          or ....
          khush akhlaqi dil ko sajati hai . :)

Life is a painting we all color .