zanelouw740

Hi guys. I wiped my old story and I will be starting fresh. It still have the same title but a different story line and cover as you might have seen. I hope you guys will like my new version once it's out. Not sure when but it will be out soon xx

zanelouw740

Hi guys. I wiped my old story and I will be starting fresh. It still have the same title but a different story line and cover as you might have seen. I hope you guys will like my new version once it's out. Not sure when but it will be out soon xx

Anordinaryblackchild

Deep Passion is an interesting story I love it,what I would say you should improve is the flow of the story and the punctuation and grammar,but apart from that your story is awesome❤❤❤

zanelouw740

@MerveilleApamato thank you so much for the feedback. That helps for the future. Thxs again 
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Anordinaryblackchild

Thanks for the follow and pls do check out my books,no pressure tho thanks

zanelouw740

@MerveilleApamato I hope you enjoyed it. Still new to this. I will check yours soon xx
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