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Heyy, i just completed reading your novel , if you are thinking of editing it , please consider adding (") before and after dialogues. It would be much more clear to read then. 

He has risked losing her once, not anymore.
          
          Reserved
          Ruthless
          Lethal
          35-years old Mafia boss Zyran Raichand, cloaked in the guise of CEO at Nevah, had always lived by his own rules. 
          
          Beneath the polished veneer of a billionaire businessman lay a man whose onyx eyes could set the world aflame. 
          
          Abandoned by his parents at the age of six, Zyran found solace and strength in his grandparents. Their safety was his one vulnerability, a fact he guarded fiercely. 
          
          As he made his way through the shadows of his dual existence, the one person who had slipped through his grasp remained a haunting presence— Eleanora. The very woman who had ignited a fire within him, only to be lost in the wake of his ruthless ambitions. 
          
          Now, after years of maintaining his distance, fate had thrust them together again.
          
          Will he push her away from him again?
          
          Or will he risk it to betray her brother?
          
          ★★★
          
          She had risked wanting him once, would she want him again?
          
          Eleanora Silverado, the self-made billionaire who could cut you down with a smile and reapply her lip gloss without missing a beat, felt her heart race as she stared at her reflection. Zyran Raichand— ruthless, untouchable— had walked away when she confessed, leaving her shattered.
          
          Now, he was back, sitting at her family’s dinner table, colder, harder, and more irresistible than ever. The memory of his onyx eyes haunted her, stirring something deep inside.
          
          She had risked her heart for him before and had paid dearly. 
          
          Could she handle another round?
          
          Or would she be the one to walk away this time?
          
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          Savannah was known to be a kind and caring woman, the sort who would go out of her way to help others. Unfortunately she was stuck with a guy who wouldn't care about her, later she also finds out he cheated on her. The guy's friend leaked this and Savannah got close with Kritiz Adhikary, a man who seemed like a saviour but was a devil under the covers. 
          
          Savannah Aurora fell in love with him, and they dated for a month, she also planned to marry him after completing her graduation and getting a job, but destiny didn't want this, Kritiz disappeared under the wraps leaving Savannah heartbroken.
          
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          Dear lovely reader, I extend an invitation to you! If the whispers of fate allow it, kindly meander through the corridors of my profile and grace my humble book, 'Tainted Love', with your precious attention. Let the threads of our connection weave a tapestry of shared emotions, and may the words within those pages whisper secrets to your soul. I eagerly await your presence in the world I've created, where love and heartache entwine like the tender shoots of a rose.

Heyy I am thinking to continue with my story "where the destiny leads us'" the core 10 friends 
          but not sure if my story is good enough to continue....

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