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Hai kakak cantikk, kalo boleh bisa minta tolong untuk baca dan beri kritik atau sarannya di cerita yang baru saja saya buat? Mungkin tidak sesuai dengan selera kakak tapi siapa tau kakak akan tertarik, makasih kakak.. 
          
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