@ -saiba hey i just wanna say, the first few chapters from your book The Devil are like ho your telling a friend a story. I'm missing a lot of detail and you can just put pictures in it. But you can also describe the room and then put a picture in it. Because I'm reading it like I'm not in the story. You know what I mean. When a story is so detailed it's like you're there in the story and you can imagine it happening. It's just a tip. But I hope it will help you.