zearph-

I was re-reading the Skyrim fic and decided to remove pointless things from it to make it flow better, that way chapter 6 will be more interesting.

zearph-

i noticed, I'm trying to fix it but my computer is being a pain about saving it
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grandmega154

@zearph- hey man some chapters are out of order
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grandmega154

hey man it been a while but i need Chinese first and surnames for three of my ocs who have dark dragon light dragon martial souls and a hell fire phoenix great beast in my ice king story

grandmega154

@zearph- thanks man for the names i will use them in chapter 3 of Deus soul land 2 ice king also fun fact i had the word count around 6101 words
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zearph-

@grandmega154 here's what I've come up with, with the info I have currently 
            
            Ok so for the black haired one 冷清秋 (Lěng Qīngqiū)
            
            冷 (Lěng) – it means Cold, aloof
            
            清秋 (Qīngqiū) – "Clear Autumn," evokes a serene yet distant atmosphere
            
            
            
            The purple haired girl what I've come up with is 柳云惜 (Liǔ Yúnxī)
            
            柳 (Liǔ) – meaning Willow, symbolizing resilience and grace
            
            云惜 (Yúnxī) – "Cherish the clouds," gentle and poetic, suggesting humility and emotional intelligence
            
            
            
            And lastly the red one a bit in the nose but 凤焱君 (Fèng Yànjūn)
            
            凤 (Fèng) – Phoenix
            
            焱 (Yàn) – Blazing fire (three fire radicals together)
            
            君 (Jūn) – Monarch, ruler
            
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grandmega154

@zearph- for the the characters go read ice king chapter 2 for gender all females and for personality for the black haired one is aloof and keep distance for her unknown power of death is did not come from her martial soul for the purple haired one she is a hard worker and is good with the commoners and final one she is also hard worker as she is the leader of the spirit beasts in Deus land that is  and keeps the order along the spirit beasts with pretty much all of them under her commend and like i said she is a hell fire phoenix
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ackimmermann

Yo it's been a while, how you been? How's your skyrim fic holdimg up? Your stories are as good as I remember

zearph-

@ackimmermann thank you, and Skyrim had to go on pause for a bit so I could get good at making and writing OC's as it was lacking in my newest attempt.
            
            But I do have the prologue in the works almost completed, a hint at it is tatsumi will be on the cart this time, that makes the civil war more interesting.
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