your story is AMAZING!!!! I read it in such a quick time and when I got to the end I was like wait please don't let this be the end!!! after reading this, it got me interested in these kind of books!! one of the things I love about the way you wrote this was at the begging. most authors take at least 3 pages to introduce the story which yeah I get it is good for scene setting but I find it a much more enjoyable read when it dives straight into the plot! I dunno if that's just me but oh well! do u have any good stories or authors I should look out for while I'm waiting for another amazing story from u??! jk I'm not trying to be demanding Im saying it would be really great if u wrote a second story because I think you have a real good talent for writing and I love it!! Xx
