Hola! perdona si te molesto. pero me gustaría saber si te podrías pasar. leer mi historia. Y te agradecería muchísimo si dejarás tus votos y comentarios. gracias.
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I like how you started with a type of great suspension that grabbed my attention quickly! There were some spelling/grammar errors and some choppy sentences that need to be fixed. Other than that great start!