Hey! I've read what you've written for your book. I'm not a big fan fic reader but as I do like the odd One Direction one, so I took the chance reading yours like you asked, and I honestly think it's got the potential to be a great book because your story line is great. I love the thought of all the boys liking her. However, being a Larry shipper and a Liam lover, I am just jehdbfgbregbetfhgbilghviosrng, all over the place. I think you might want to proof read before you upload if you don't already, and also try to work on paragraphs and not just sentences, use more punctuation etc. I do love your book, so i'll continue to read it. Good luck! :) x
