zhaeynaa

hello everyone! thank you so much for all the love on the story so far. i wanted to ask your opinion on something: do you prefer stories written in 1st person or 3rd person pov?
          	
          	i also wanted to share a quick update regarding the offside. after rereading it recently, i noticed there were quite a few filler moments that don't push the plot forward. because i want this story to be the best it can be, i've decided to revise it! i have my common final exams coming up, so the revisions will start right after i'm completely done with those. thanks for being so understanding, i appreciate you all!

czentiny

@zhaeynaa Hi! 3rd person pov really worked well for Offside but It will also be crazy to have a 1st person pov of the characters once in a while. I hope this makes sense. 
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zhaeynaa

hello everyone! thank you so much for all the love on the story so far. i wanted to ask your opinion on something: do you prefer stories written in 1st person or 3rd person pov?
          
          i also wanted to share a quick update regarding the offside. after rereading it recently, i noticed there were quite a few filler moments that don't push the plot forward. because i want this story to be the best it can be, i've decided to revise it! i have my common final exams coming up, so the revisions will start right after i'm completely done with those. thanks for being so understanding, i appreciate you all!

czentiny

@zhaeynaa Hi! 3rd person pov really worked well for Offside but It will also be crazy to have a 1st person pov of the characters once in a while. I hope this makes sense. 
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zhaeynaa

hiiii, everyone! sorry for the late updates. i just got really busy with my acads, so i didn't have time for the past few weeks.
          
          today i finally have some free time, so i just need to proofread what i’ve written in my draft and will post it later once everything looks good!
          
          once again, thank you so much for your patience and for sticking around. i hope you enjoy the new chapter and are taking care of yourselves! 

zhaeynaa

happy new year, everyoneee!! 
          
          i hope you’re all having a great start to the year. just a quick update: i’m in the middle of proofreading chapter 13 of offside right now. stay tuned, as the update will be posted in a bit! 

zhaeynaa

hello everyone! i’m finally back! 
          
          it’s officially christmas break, so i have time to write again! thank you so much for waiting patiently. i’m continuing the offside today, so please look forward to a chapter update later! ⛄️