zhariakamille

I finally found you! But now I don't see where your stuff is. Geez! 

I love this! It sounds so grown up! Do you mind if I let my friend read it? He is also a writer and he is much better at giving feedback. I only saw a couple of grammatical errors. But that isn't a big deal. And a couple of places where I would change a word or two, but overall  very intriguing. As always. I want more!